| Deviant Login | Shop |
 | Join deviantART for FREE  |
Take the Tour  |
| Digital Art / Other / Landscapes & Scenery | ©2004-2013 ~ViridianMoon |
The Journal Portal
Browse Journals |
Polls |
deviantART [dee·vee·un'nt·ART]
Keep in Touch!
|
Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
|
Sta.sh
The tones of color were really well chosen....
Congratulations
Anyway to the piece:
Actually not a bad picture, let me elaborate:
Render:
Quite a nice render The water & terrain works quite well.
Photoshopped Render Bits:
Well, not bad, however, if you wanted the render to be more convincing (especially since this looks like a healthy terrestrial planetscape) You could implement tree's from stocks & such,
also your work with the waterfall is not bad, looks liek you smudged the waterfall? eitherway, overlay some textures like rocks underneath thewaterfall, also implementing rocks like its hanging out of the waterfall could add some nifty nifty depth
The planet in the sky is not bad, the blending of it into the sky is good,
it hides the often overused look of a greg-martin-tutorial type.
the colours a little funky, but not to bad, the ring is ok, but it dosnt have solid edges - if you observe a real ring, they have an edge, rings,
yours is like a swirling gas or something,
a planet ring has edges, this is why we should hate twirl filter!
Colouration:
Seem nice & calm, gives an attitude to the image which is nice.
Serene & comforting
Good job on that.
All in all:
A nice calm terrestrial space scape piece that is quite well done, but could do with a few more improvements
(And, yeah, I did smudge the waterfall. It looked pretty bad after the render; it was sort of choppy and had some nasty bits of pink in it... x.x)
Well, I've taken note of everything you said. Perhaps I'll redo it, as you're quite right that it could use work.