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I agree that the red spot looks odd. It looks too smoothly swirled and looses appearance as a solid texture, IMO. And I'm wondering if the light should be less visible behind the moons? It seems that you didn't put quite enough shadow in the space behind them, but I'm really unsure. Like I said, not my forte.
Anyway, nice work overall, VM. Looking forward to seeing more of your stuff whenever you get the time (and more importantly willingness) to work on it.
But yeah, the red spot does look weird. Too smooth and unnatural, but it'd be too hard to fix, so I'm not gonna bother. I'll do better on the next one!
Thanks for the input, anyway.
Glad to see something from you.